We're all different, no one is the same in this mad world. We're all unique, we have different names, different stories behind us. We look different, act different, and sound different. We believe in stuff that is different. We dress different, we move different. We hang out with different people, talk in a different way, eat different foods, try different things, take different risks, we're all just; different. But we're in the same game, only in different levels. But we all stand united, united by one rhythm. That is the Inter Class Competition theme that the class of 2017 chose. We are all different, but ever since the Cajamarca Class Without Walls trip we became more and more united. There was a bus, specifically bus 2, who was made up of students with no particular bond. Obviously, they saw each other at school, but never talked. Music brought them together, the rhythm of Spanish "Reggaeton" was what they usually danced and this eventually brought the students and teachers together and they became united by that rhythm. My bus in Cajamarca was bus 1, I wasn't friends with anyone there, but thanks to musica and having boys sing songs with weird lyrics, we started laughing and making memories. An now, ever since that trip, my "prom" has become more united. We hang out with different people, some who we never imagined in doing so. We became united by one rhythm. And now, this is our ICC quote, not only because the quote is nice, but because it is true, and it reflects on the anecdote that we share as a grade. We are all, together, united, and prepared for this ICC week to make in the best it can be! |
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Santiago
8/31/2014 12:38:37 pm
Great job Noa. I was in Bus 2 and I completely can relate to what you wrote. I do feel that we are more united as a prom, but do you think that this can relate to the IA in anyway? Like for example how we are all from different groups and yet we all share and collaborate perfectly. Great post!
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9/1/2014 03:12:51 am
Noa, I really liked your article, especially because I can tell that you really believe in everything you are saying and that there is a level of intimacy and love for the subject. You built up ideas very well; you started with a hook, then explained further and ended up with a conclusion. However, towards the end, I felt it become a little repetitive. I think it would be helpful if by the end, you consolidated a clear takeaway and made the connection to the IA stronger. I see how you are building the idea, talking about the metaphor; maybe explain how this can be a metaphor for other things, too. Generalize it, I guess. :) Hope this helps!
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